*JPM smiles as they narrate again*
After Micklang wakes up from his second experience with his spirit self, he fully enters the world of Freiyon and it appears, somehow, he is falling from the sky. From his vantage point he can see Mountains, rivers, woods, oceans and lakes covering the land in all directions. He and the eagle were falling quickly towards a large lake, where a group of talking trees native to Freiyon look up to see him.
'Down on the ground, although there were no creatures or humans there, there was life none the less. Something was moving in a forest near the lake, something that could see the duo falling.
"What in the na
*a lovely sun rises over a silent, perfect forest as birds sing and all seems to be absolutely perfect for about a minute until suddenly there appears a large crowd of people crowding through it, all going nuts about something. The crowd start to head towards what looks like a cabin of sorts and starts yelling and chanting and screaming for excitement. JPM is seen inside trying to write a new story.*
JPM:
What the heck...
*looks outside to see the crowd* woah... what are they all doing here? *He notices that there's signs saying 'bring back Micklang' or 'we love Abrigail' or even 'Freiyon frees us all!'
JPM:
Oh you're kidding me! They're
*narrates more* Once Micklang sets off on his boat down the river, it's smooth sailing for a while until he decides to investigate his new form. He finally sees that he is a lightning-tailed squirrel and with this amazing new revelation, he is told by his spirit self to create a sword with his belt and the water combined using his new, magical abilities. With a few practices of the sword, Micklang is soon ready for anything else that the world may have. It doesn't take long before he meets up with a group of otters who, like the tree clan, are curious about Micklang and want to know who and what he is.
'"Sure, and I was thinking you were a f
Justin:
Phew I was worried I was jumping into the action too quickly and too much ^^! What would you say is the worst part of this section though? Since we have to find some bad things after all.
Nathan:
Well...the lion's actions were a bit extreme, but I kind of get the reason why though.
Justin:
Anything else that you can spot? Anything at all really?
Nathan:
That's pretty much it. I can't exactly think of anything else.
Justin:
No problem bud. Let's keep going and see if we find anything else. Here is a very good part I admire a heap, lets try tear it apart.
'Oscar saw that Micklang cared for the beast, even though the lion had t
*Narrates* so after the brief meeting with Freelorghter the bear, which is a name I still feel should be changed but ah well, Micklang catches up with his friends and they finally reach th sea-side where they are greeted by a sailing group of mice lead by possibly the greatest representation of Reepicheep I could do: Captain Abrigail Cheesethief. For those of you unaware, Reepicheep was a mouse warrior from the Narnia stories. This mouse is not only a warriro but a captain of his own ship, a fierce and true friend and also says more than Reepicheep too.
''"Ahoy there, land-lubbers, how d'ya do?" A voice called out.
Oscar looked up and saw a
*commercial break*
*when the commercial ends, Nathan was drinking something to calm himself down and Justin was trying to look professional.*
Nathan:
Ahhh..much better. *he puts the energy drink he was having down, it's a gothic themed one with a fanged skull on the
cover*
Justin:
Are you ready to continue onwards to the next leg of Micklang's journey than?
Nathan:
Sure, go ahead.
*Narrates* so after Micklang saved a Hyena by the name of Dillon, we get a small part where Micklang and the crew encounter something very bizarre in the water.*
'He looked around the horizon, taking in every wave or movement and wondered what he should do a
*narrates somewhat quickly* In the time that Micklang found out about this deceased kangaroo, tursorl, Snawger and freelorghter recognize that Micklang is in dire trouble as, from their encounter with him, they now have a somewhat odd connection to the squirrel even though we never really saw Micklang transfer his powers to these three. Of course, the three of them combine forces to become companions for one purpose, to assist Micklang and save his friends. Talk about a very peculiar and kind of out of nowhere revelation.
'"Alright, let's move, move, move! We've got a mission here! Come on, lend a hand there! We can't waste a single moment.
Nathan:
Ah yes...let's see. Bring it on. I can't wait to see it.
Justin:
That's right! It's time for the ultimate battle between Micklang and his friends against Quasapoor and his group of evil cohorts! In a chapter I can only refer to as 'the Bridge Battle'
'The group charged onward until they came to the beach where Micklang and his friends were waiting.
"Ready, everyone?" Micklang announced, swinging his sword around and pointing it forward.
"For Micklang! Micklang the warrior!" His friends all shouted.
Tursorl and Dightorp led their tree friends thundering through the forest, following the tigers' group close behind. The tiger and hi
'Micklang was sword-fighting with an evil hyena when Dillon jumped up from behind Micklang and pushed the hyena off the bridge.
"Thanks for that, Dillon!" Micklang said.
"Not a problem, always glad to help." Dillon replied, jumping away and pushing another evil creature into the sea.
Harriet was trying extremely hard to keep track of her children, but then she heard one of them cry.
She looked up and saw her dear Melody still at the entrance to the bridge, crying as she tried to bash a fish away from her foot.
Harriet ran back, ducking and weaving through the attack. When she came to Melody, she kicked the fish off and picked Melody up, takin
Justin: *looks confused* uuuummmm ok than... Oh right that one thing from ... yeh ok that makes sense now ^^!
*narrates* so it seems that Micklang now has to conquer a new mystery of a mountain that somehow holds the key to everyone becoming lightning tailed creatures on the island. Along the way, unfortunatly, he is frightened by the appearance of something he wished he didn't have to see again. An eagle has appeared from the sky looking as if it intends to eat our furry friend. However, when Micklang prepares to fight the bird, he is shocked to discover that this eagle as well has a lightning shaped tail and, like Micklang, had been given